Self Evaluation

I wasn't very satisfied with the grade that I recieved. I feel that I work hard in everything that I do so I expect to get a good grade. I do know that I need more help in my writting, and thats probably what got me the grade that I recieved.From the responses that I recieved I feel that I paraphrase well but I don't organize my thoughts well in the summary. I still have the problem of writting the way that I speak and I need to change that. For the next assignment I'm going to meet with Susie so that she explains in greater depth the areas that I'm having trouble in. I want her to help me and break down my writting. The comments were really good and and I see where I'm messing up.